When the class watched my music video, they liked the main idea of the narrative and the use of filters throughout. They also liked the use of the cross between the narrative and performance. However, as I was already aweare of what I have to change, they all agreed that I needed to refilm the argument scene between the girl and her dad. They also agreed, as I did too, that some scenes are clear that there is no drummer (as she had to leave filming early)
From having this feedback, I have refilmed the argument scene and edited the clips that needed improving, taking their advice on board. I also tightened the lip syncing and instruments within the performance. I also added another clip of the girl checking her phone, receiving a text from her dad asking her to come home, to help the viewers understand why he is so angry towards her within the video.
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